Stephen Knight, 4 January 2001
“... For Colleen If not the giant redwoods taking centuries to reach the light, nor the lights- camera-action typhoons regular as clockwork in the murky Tonga Bar, nor, perched above LA, the penitential Getty – its prospect of the coastline smudged by airborne crap, nor even the Chronicle’s news that the universe is flat, and expanding faster and faster for ever – ‘Wow! Wow! Wow!’ to quote one scientist – then how about the way you drove your car wrists out, double-jointed, or, sealed in silver paper, those skinny joints I could never light, or the line in a Visitors’ Book in the Valley of the Moon left a decade earlier (This is a beautiful setting to put the ghosts to rest) or else that ‘bohemian’ legacy of Venice Beach, a henna tendril fading from your ankle slowly, over days ...”